Here’s the next in the top ten of new novelist’s pitfalls:
Setting and description delivered in large chunks
Now you’re going to get my take and memories of what the items mean. The list of Top Ten Pitfalls was read and not handed out or displayed, so any confusion is mine and mine alone.
Setting/Description in large chunks means lengthy description of scenery and weather with no action and no tension and—since tension is the torque that propels a story along—no story.
No story = No Readers.