Reason #7 – Talking Heads

Talking heads instead of narration

According to Jack Bickham, author of Scene and Structure, there are four components to dialogue (CoD):
• words that are spoken
• attribution—so your readers don’t forget who’s talking
• stage action—action, expression, and body language
• internalization—thoughts and feelings

Too often it’s just the words that are spoken and the other parts of dialogue are forgotten. I seem to remember a “rule of three” about not having more than three sentences of a person speaking before it’s broken up by another bit of something.

Nothing should occur in a vacuum.

Published by Norm Benson

My name is Norm Benson and I'm currently researching and writing a biography of Walter C. Lowdermilk. In addition to being a writer, I'm an avid homebrewer. I'm also a registered professional forester in California with thirty-five years of experience. My background includes forest management, fire fighting, law enforcement, teaching, and public information.

4 thoughts on “Reason #7 – Talking Heads

  1. I don’t read Joanna Trollope, but have listened to her books being read on the radio.

    She has a habit of writing one line of dialogue, then one bit of stage action. Once you have noticed this, it’s seriously irritating.

    So I think one has to avoid being formulaic about it.

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